A neighbor knocked on my door, pale and uneasy. She said she kept hearing my son crying at night—screaming for someone to stop. I told her that couldn’t be true. He slept through the night.
That evening, I pretended to fall asleep and waited.
Just after midnight, I heard it.
Soft footsteps.
My son’s bedroom door creaked open on its own.
Someone stood in the doorway, perfectly still.
And in the dim hallway light, I realized with horror that it wasn’t my son awake—
it was someone who had been visiting him every night while we slept.
My neighbor knocked on my door just after sunset, her face pale, eyes darting toward the hallway behind me.
“I’m sorry to bother you,” she said quickly, lowering her voice, “but I need to ask… are you okay at night?”
I frowned. “What do you mean?”
She hesitated, twisting her fingers together. “I keep hearing your son crying. Screaming, actually. Begging someone to stop.”
A chill ran through me. “That can’t be right,” I said firmly. “He sleeps through the night. Always has.”
She didn’t argue. She just nodded slowly, like someone who had already expected that answer. “I thought so,” she murmured. “I just… wanted to be sure.”
After she left, I stood in the hallway for a long time, listening to the quiet apartment. My son’s door was closed. No sound. No movement.
That night, I decided to test it.
I put my son to bed as usual. Read him a story. Kissed his forehead. He fell asleep quickly, breathing slow and even. I left the door slightly ajar and returned to my room.
Then I waited.
I lay perfectly still, eyes closed, breathing slow, pretending to sleep. The clock on my nightstand ticked loudly in the silence. Ten minutes passed. Then twenty.
Just after midnight, I heard it.
Soft footsteps.
Not running. Not sneaking. Calm. Measured.
My heart began to pound as my son’s bedroom door creaked open on its own.
I held my breath.
A shadow stretched across the hallway floor, long and thin. Someone stood in the doorway of his room, perfectly still, blocking the faint nightlight inside.
In the dim glow of the hall, I realized with sudden horror—
It wasn’t my son awake.
It was someone else standing there.
Someone who had been visiting him every night while we slept.
I couldn’t move.
Every instinct screamed at me to sit up, to shout, to run—but my body refused. Fear pinned me to the mattress as the figure remained motionless in my son’s doorway.
It was tall.
Too tall to be a child.
Its head was tilted slightly, as if listening to something only it could hear. One hand rested on the doorframe, fingers unnaturally long, bent at the joints the wrong way.
Then it spoke.
Not loudly. Not angrily.
Softly.
“Again,” it whispered.
A small voice answered from the darkness of the room.
My son.
“Please,” he whimpered. “I did it already.”
The figure leaned forward just a little. “You missed one.”
I bit my lip so hard I tasted blood.
My son began to cry—not loud, not dramatic. Quiet, broken sobs. The kind a child makes when they know crying won’t help.
“I don’t want to,” he said.
There was a pause.
Then the figure stepped inside the room.
I heard the bed creak. I heard slow breathing that did not belong to my child. I heard something like fingernails scraping softly across skin.
“Stop,” my son whispered.
That was when I moved.
I bolted upright and ran down the hall, flipping on every light as I went. “Get away from him!” I screamed.
The bedroom was empty.
My son lay in his bed, eyes squeezed shut, tears soaking his pillow. No figure. No shadow. No sign anyone had been there.
I gathered him into my arms, shaking just as badly as he was.
“Why didn’t you tell me?” I whispered.
He clung to my shirt. “You said I was sleeping,” he sobbed. “He said you wouldn’t believe me.”
My blood turned cold.
“He?” I asked.
My son nodded. “The quiet man. He comes when it’s dark. He makes me practice not screaming.”
I didn’t sleep that night.
I sat on the floor beside my son’s bed, lights blazing, every door in the apartment locked. He eventually drifted off from exhaustion, his small hand wrapped tightly around mine.
At dawn, I asked him everything.
The quiet man had been coming “for a long time.” He stood in the doorway at first. Then closer. He told my son that noise was dangerous. That parents who woke up didn’t understand. That crying made things worse.
“He said I had to learn,” my son whispered. “So you wouldn’t hear.”
That was when I understood the neighbor’s words.
Screaming for someone to stop.
The crying wasn’t new.
It had just been trained out of him.
We left that day. No packing. No explanations. I took my son and drove until the city disappeared behind us. We stayed with my sister, then moved again.
The quiet man never followed.
But some habits didn’t leave.
My son still startles at footsteps. He still checks doorways before sleeping. Sometimes, when he thinks I’m not looking, he practices breathing slowly and silently.
“Just in case,” he says.
I’ve installed nightlights everywhere. Cameras. Motion sensors. They’ve never caught anything.
But I know better now.
Some things don’t need doors to enter. Some don’t leave marks. Some don’t want children because they’re loud—
They want them because they can be taught not to be.
If you’ve ever dismissed a child’s fear because it didn’t wake you…
If you’ve ever assumed silence meant safety…
If you’ve ever slept through something that should have terrified you—
Then you understand why I’ll never tell my son to be quiet again.
Because the most dangerous visitors aren’t the ones who wake the house.
They’re the ones who make sure it stays asleep






Part 2 
